Rough cut - feedback

Rough cut feedback/plan for changes
                                                                                                                 pink = need to change 
                                                                                                                green = new thing to do 

 Retake photos with school camera ?                                     
- re write/adjust article and titles/contents pages 
- re do double page spread - layout 

Front cover
-Jenna - front cover - studio 

Contents
-sections 
- contents - show range

Double page spread 
Conventional layout - article on the right, and picture on the left.
Column dividers ?
Consistency in fonts/colour
Quotes  usually title, not artists name.
 Another girl band - beach - white background 

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